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OS: For the Love of Death Pg. 1 by MoPotter OS: For the Love of Death Pg. 1 by MoPotter
**You guys voted for me to upload this page-by-page, and in doing so, I would like constructive criticism on what to do for the rest of the pages! Like do I need SFX, more screen tones- less screen tones?? Better panels to progress the story, etc. Greatly appreciated!! :D Keep in mind this is also my first EVER manga page- so be nice!! ;)

So I know this will probably be confusing for people at first because nobody has any idea what this one-shot is about, but I guess that's the great test of my drawing skills! Whether or not you can decipher what's happening ;D

So this is :iconpwnedbypineapple:'s one-shot that she won for getting second in my Manga Idea Contest last year!! She won a 4-page one-shot out of her original story idea, and this is the scene she chose :D
I don't know if I should give you all a preface as to what's happening...all you really need to know is that a little girl just died and a priest is praying over her. Death (the black-haired boy in the lower panels) suddenly got all glowy and trance-like and he knows why it's happening...but he can't control it in this particular state! Now he is being drawn to this dead girl in a village he was previously chased out of (on account of being a demon-child).

Yeah. Soooo wait for the next page to see what happens next! ;D
(Or you could go to *PwnedByPineapple's account and read the actual written version she's working on! Really great story and you get a lot moe background to what is supposed to be happening here xD [link])


THIS is page 1!
Page 2!
Page 3!
*But go here to get more background on the story!
READ RIGHT TO LEFT LIKE NORMAL MANGA!


Drawn in ink pens and then edited for shading and tones in SAI and PS~
Story and characters (c) *PwnedByPineapple
Art (c) *MoPotter
Screens by ~screentone
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PwnedByPineapple Featured By Owner Aug 9, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
OMGGGGG. :heart:
This is the first time I've ever seen anything original of mine brought to life in any medium other than words, so I'm sorta bouncing up and down in my seat right now.
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It looks awesome. 8D Goodness... I don't even know what to say. I'm just so excited. :glomp: (And now really motivated to finish that chapter, lol.)
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VenDuckie Featured By Owner Aug 7, 2012
Sweet! It looks good so far :)
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MoPotter Featured By Owner Aug 8, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Thank youuu!! :}
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